[Report This]Date: July 29 2026 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
One of my favorite on going series at the moment, please continue it!
Slightly bummed they didn’t spill that the passcodes were given right away, it feels a bit dragging now but still looking forward to the next scene!
Please stop changing the title. Titles are how some people search for updates to their favorite stories and it’s really annoying that you do this.
Author's Response:
Hey there, thanks for the review and feedback. Glad you are enjoying the story so far. And yes, there may still be a bit of mind games left to unfold before Annie spells everything out about her newfound control!
Hear you on the title change; sometimes these things are necessary for authors still refining works in progress. But it's not done lightly, and hopefully doesn't add any further challenges to following the story in the future.
[Report This]Date: July 20 2026 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Logged in just to say I really hope this one continues!
I’d love to see some microscopic shrinking now that Rob gave the passwords away.
Annie should really make him regret it, keep up the great writing!
Author's Response:
Hey there, thanks for the review and feedback! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far and looking forward to more! I've split myself across too much work lately but definitely do plan to return to this one, so we'll see where things go from here.
[Report This]Date: June 26 2026 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Really well-written/paced.. this story is pressing a lot of buttons. Hope it's not finished. Thanks for writing and great job.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Really glad it's an enjoyable and hopefully hot read so far! And it's definitely not finished just yet, more to come so stay tuned :)
[Report This]Date: May 28 2026 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
So good
Author's Response:
Glad it is a good read so far :)