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Reviewer: blackflashed Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 03 2026 9:09 PM Title: Super Mario Bros Part 2

I had the chance to read your story and was impressed by how well it was written, although I still have a few questions about certain parts. I'm very excited to talk about it with you. I also have some questions regarding the story and a few thoughts I'd like to share. Can we chat on Discord? My Discord is: avablaise_98

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2026 7:39 PM Title: Legend Of Zelda Part 2

Nice. Most of the Zelda worlds would be saved by kit if she goes after all of them...unfortunately for her there are two Zelda worlds that would be destroyed. The tears of the kingdom Link could escape by using Ascend to go through her body and since she already swallowed him she wouldn't know and would leave. The second one is the Echoes of wisdom world since that world has a link kit would eat, but the hero of that world is Zelda and with all the others Kit wouldn't realize that until it is too late.

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