Date: July 08 2026 12:23 AM Title: Touma and Ari (180 cm → 16.5 cm)
Amazing. Fairies are generally good, because noone in size community dares to write fairies without giving them full effort, but Jellytea fairies are really next tier. Character choice is really good, as you can't usually build a romance with fairy due to them being childish brats, but Airi's maturity and somewhat motherly nature makes it possible. As for normal fairy brat stuff, where loving and kind hearted fairy doesn't work, Zoya takes care of it. There's still feeling that persona she had at the start evaporated too quickly, with barely any signs left towards the end(If I wrote it, I'd probably make signs of her still acting sheepishly when Airi is scolding her or maybe breaking her playful brat persona when Airi mentions Touma getting to normal size, just to make her seem like the same nervous kid from earlier. If not, maybe not writing her nervous at all but leaning into fairy curiousity trait? Well, it works good as it is, it's just that there's a bit of a disconnect between introduction and how she behaves a few chapters later, maybe it's just me)
Touma having Airi as childhood friend is pretty nice addition, as usually - fairy stories are first encounter. Having some backstory together really let's explore some things.
I do think that the universe is pretty closed off though, as Touma never left the house, and can be expanded upon. Maybe through another story about another person? Like Touma had a stalking girl who secretly liked him and she figured out he was kidnapped by evil fairies? Well, that's just one of ideas. We really haven't left fairy house so expanding the universe would be pretty nice. After all, Touma still has people at home like family and classmates who might be worried.
[Report This]Date: July 01 2026 11:16 PM Title: Touma and Ari (180 cm → 16.5 cm)
Hi! I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed reading your story.
It's rare to come across a story that feels so vivid and immersive. Your writing made every scene easy to visualize, and the characters felt genuine and memorable. The world you've built has a level of depth that kept me invested from beginning to end, and while reading, I could clearly imagine it unfolding like a cinematic comic series.
I'm a professional digital artist who specializes in comic adaptations and commissioned artwork. One of my favorite things is helping authors bring their stories to life visually while staying faithful to the emotions, characters, and atmosphere that made the original work special.
As I was reading your story, I couldn't help imagining how incredible certain scenes would look in comic form. I genuinely believe your story has strong visual storytelling potential, and I would love the opportunity to work with you if that's something you'd ever be interested in exploring.
If you'd like, we can talk more on Discord: dizzysketchie. I'd be happy to answer any questions, discuss ideas, and show examples of my work. No pressure at all I simply loved your story and wanted to reach out because I think it could make an amazing comic.
Thank you for sharing your work, and I look forward to hearing from you.
Date: June 30 2026 5:19 AM Title: Zoya’s Prize (4 mm → 1 mm)
Nice. I really hope he shrinks more and at dinner accidentally gets mixed up in the fairies food. Which one doesn't matter. Though Ari would be best since if she accidentally swallows him she will have to use magic to save him from inside her stomach thus use up some of her supply making him remain shrunk longer
Date: June 13 2026 11:02 PM Title: Touma and Ari (180 cm → 16.5 cm)
As expected - fairies are the best!
[Report This]Date: May 20 2026 3:07 PM Title: Touma and Ari (180 cm → 16.5 cm)
This was a really sweet story!