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Reviewer: Yougts Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2026 2:49 PM Title: CH1: The Game

Really cool premise! 

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2026 9:20 PM Title: CH5: Play Again?

Definitely want to see a sequel! Would love to see them play again with one of the boys deciding he wants his size change to be permanent. Maybe there’s new challenges? Maybe Melanie changes the game settings, like the slowing down the progress meter? Can’t wait to read what you come up with

Reviewer: Notoriousfat Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2026 5:44 AM Title: CH1: The Game

Loving it to far! Can't wait for the next chapter!



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