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Reviewer: blackflashed Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2026 9:04 PM Title: Girl Can’t Help It

I read your story and genuinely thought it was very well written, but there are still a few things that I'm not completely clear about. I'm really excited to discuss it with you. I also have some questions about the story and a few thoughts I'd love to share. Can we chat on Discord? My Discord is: avablaise_98

Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2026 8:44 PM Title: Girl Can’t Help It

Loved this short read! The way she fooled him into trusting her was pretty hot.

Is the 'Jesus? No, Brain' a reference to Live of Brian? That popped into my mind immediately 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hadn't thought of it at first, but that is a funny coincidence! :)

Reviewer: kongoboy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2026 1:04 AM Title: A Shrinkie In The Crumbs

Good start on this one! I hope you continue, I like this one!



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

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