


[Report This]Date: May 13 2026 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
very nice premises and i love the younger sister teasy attitude
looking forward for xontinuation




[Report This]Date: April 17 2026 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great your story completely pulled me in. I could vividly picture every scene, feel the emotions, and watch it all unfold like a cinematic experience in my mind. The depth of your characters and the richness of your world genuinely inspired me. I’d love to talk more about your story, and I also have a few questions I’d really like to ask you. If you’re open to it, could you come to Discord? It’s a bit easier to communicate there. My Discord is: artatia_draws




[Report This]Date: April 11 2026 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws




[Report This]Date: April 11 2026 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice start, but it's a little too short. Hipe to see more
Date: April 11 2026 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
I kinda wanna see what the world was like before the size-changes.
The summary described Mark's sister as "pitiful", so did he tease her as she does to him now?
Because if he did, then what happened to him would be role-reversal/karmic punishment, which I quite like.
Date: April 11 2026 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start, cant wait to see where this goes. Hope his sister is also extra busty




[Report This]Date: April 11 2026 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can’t wait to see where this story goes