Date: May 13 2026 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
Aw man I was hoping Chance would punish Gina for what she did to him at the end.




[Report This]Date: May 12 2026 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 9
Enjoyed the story. I hope you do a part 3. Maybe both Chance and Allison get eaten by Gina right as Gina goes on vacation to Europe. Thinking they can get a free vacation by hiding in Gina’s stomach. But things don’t got as planned with Gina being stopped up and not using the bathroom for days.




[Report This]Date: April 29 2026 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
Keep it up! Its getting good.




[Report This]Date: April 17 2026 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great your story completely pulled me in. I could vividly picture every scene, feel the emotions, and watch it all unfold like a cinematic experience in my mind. The depth of your characters and the richness of your world genuinely inspired me. I’d love to talk more about your story, and I also have a few questions I’d really like to ask you. If you’re open to it, could you come to Discord? It’s a bit easier to communicate there. My Discord is: artatia_draws
Date: April 10 2026 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Glad you had Allison run on that errand hopefully it takes longer than she thinks it will. One area you could have them shrink and explore is the female milk ducts.




[Report This]Date: April 07 2026 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
Imagine the pod goes so far up into her it goes to her overies or even to the egg. How would they ever get out! Great story!




[Report This]Date: April 04 2026 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is about to get really good I'm hoping! The first story was BOMB. This one now with the sister mind blowing. Can't wait to see what happens! I never read your first one. The paragraph explaining this one drew me in. Keep it up can't wait till the ending.