Date: August 07 2026 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
This has been a fun story so far. Cute interactions and little Ru'a is more than she seems. Keep up the good work!




[Report This]Date: July 11 2026 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi! I just wanted to reach out and tell you how much I genuinely enjoyed your story.
I read a lot of fanfiction and original stories online, and every so often I come across one that completely captures my attention. Yours was definitely one of those. Your writing made every moment feel so vivid that I could easily imagine everything happening, and I kept reading because I genuinely didn't want to leave your characters or the world you'd created.
One of the things I admired most was how effortlessly everything came together. Nothing felt rushed, every emotional moment felt meaningful, and your characters felt incredibly believable. They came across like real people, and that's honestly what kept me invested all the way through.
As I read, I couldn't stop thinking about how incredible your story would look as a comic. There were so many scenes that already felt cinematic in my imagination, and I could clearly picture them becoming illustrated pages. That's actually what encouraged me to reach out to you.
I'm a professional digital artist specializing in comic adaptations, character illustrations, and cover art. I genuinely enjoy working with authors because it's incredibly rewarding to help transform stories they've spent so much time creating into a visual format while preserving everything that makes those stories special.
If you'd ever like to see some of the comics and artwork I've created, I'd be more than happy to share my portfolio with you:
Twitter/X Portfolio:
https://x.com/MFoylee/media
You can also reach me on Discord:
dizzysketchie
There's absolutely no pressure at all. Even if artwork isn't something you're looking for right now, I simply wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your story and thank you for taking the time to share it. I truly hope you continue writing because I'd absolutely love to read more of your work in the future.
Thank you again, and I hope you have a wonderful day!




[Report This]Date: July 07 2026 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 9
Love your writing. This has been a really enjoyable story to come across and I'm glad it's only half-way! Thank you and great work so far.




[Report This]Date: July 06 2026 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
"Panic started setting in. The fall below would be lethal."
I mean, would it? It always seems strange to me how physics in this kind of story don't seem to apply. You could throw an ant from a tower, and it would be fine, because they don't reach terminal velocity at their size. Or in other words, you need weight for impact.
Otherwise, I'm glad that there's a more story-driven story here, instead of the usual snuff.




[Report This]Date: May 19 2026 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oof, Ru'a is cheering on an execution? She's kinda already brainwashed into Dark Elf servitude.




[Report This]Date: May 09 2026 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ah, Love-bombing. Classic manipulation.




[Report This]Date: April 06 2026 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oooh, that last line is ominous.




[Report This]Date: April 06 2026 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love the casual, nostalgic talk of brutal pirate raids.




[Report This]Date: April 05 2026 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
Plot twist!
And now we get some intrigue, and it turns out our little human may not be so helpless after all.
Always love the "butler/sidekick is way smarter than they let on" trope.




[Report This]Date: April 05 2026 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
(Reposting since I can't edit these.)
Always up for some "humans conquered by giant races" action. Will check this out.
Addendum: Love, LOVE the bait and switch here. It seems like the dark elves will turn out to be decent folk after all, from their friendly behavior...and then Lucy gets her name casually taken from her, and the elves start gleefully talking about brutal executions. Turns out their reputation is well-deserved.
I'm interested in Lucy/R'ua's curse, the potential for her to return to her normal size is a great plot thread.




[Report This]Date: March 26 2026 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story. Went to register here as a long time lurker just to make this review. I like the setting. Can’t wait to read the next chapter. Is Bloody Ann even going to continue? It was one of the few crueler stories I enjoyed. Also are you going to upload those stories on size fiction? I came across stepped sister there and mainly use that site now.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the comment! I'm glad you're liking this! And to answer your questions: Ann might (and this is a big might) be re-written in its entirety, I like the setting and the characters but since I dropped it so many years ago I feel like I don't even write like how I used to anymore, not that I think that I'm any better, but continuing straight up where I left it would be kinda jarring. As for SF, I'm probably going to publish this there too, I haven't used the site in a while but I have my stories dispersed all around and it'll be nice if I had everything up on every site, although juggling between accounts can be a little exhausting.