[Report This]Date: November 05 2012 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really good story line, the plot is general and kind of repeatative though. If the reader could be more drawn into the story, by detailed descriptions of what he sees and feels, it would be a whole lot more enjoyable.....Example= Sarah stood towering over him, his heart was pounding wildly inside his tiny chest. The air was thick with her scent, an incredable aroma of sweet and sour musk. He was frozen with parralizing fear. He shook and jerked, like a trembling terrified baby animal, stairing at her magnificents. The overwhelming size of the giant girl was mind boggelling! Suddenly, the deep rumbling of vibrating sounds erupted from high above, a low pitch, but feminine voice shocked him, nearly knocking him off his feet. He stumbled back, and looked up the tremendious form of gigantic woman that stood looking down at him, with a wide smile on her incredable face. Her giggling laugh, was like a consuming thunder- shaking his tiny form...........
[Report This]Date: October 12 2011 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story was amazing.
Everything that happened was really well written, and very detailed.
I wouldnt change one thing about this, its perfect.
Date: July 22 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
let that Sarah girl know.
ATTACH HIM TO A VIBRATOR!
OR EAT HIM MORE!
Date: April 02 2011 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
im getting hard just thinking about it
Date: May 12 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
You poor little thing.
It must have been difficult finding the means and opportunity to get your situation typed up and posted on this website, in your condition.
Author's Response:
It was very, very difficult. But you use to be a model eh? In that case, would you mind doing some pics my story/biography? Sarah said she would do it, but now she's not... That stupid evil bitch. (turns around and sees Sarah staring right me)
From Sarah: Sorry, but this little guy has to go. He's about to regret saying that last comment. Actually, if he's insulted you in any way by asking you for pics, I'll gladly let you borrow him so he can make it up to you and kiss your ass. He's gotten pretty good at that over the last 3 years. Although, I think it's my asshole that does most of the kissing. (evil cackle)