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Reviewer: Avenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2026 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

As I read your story, the scenes and characters came to life so vividly in my mind I could practically see their expressions and movements. It made me wonder: Have you ever considered adapting this into a comic? I’m a professional digital artist and take commissions, Feel free to reach out on Discord my username is avenia_draws



Author's Response: Glad your here for it... ... It was a bigger area than I originally thought. When stuff was calm I used to commission people yeah. It would depend on your ability... In some cases I'm trying to replace memories so some of it is based on reality. That was robbed from me or tampered with. Which I modify after and exaggerate the bits I want to remember. Obviously this with enough negative pressure from the original memory becomes impossible. Or even dangerous to modify or fix. For instance a bully you think you could turn into an ally the right circumstances turning out to try and kill you. Modifying this memory for a giant story could prove fatal. In the fatal audience you get a feeling of weather you direct the situation are part of it or weather it's going to turn wrong. Sometimes you get a feeling when someone wants to kill you. It's different to if someone could kill you, if you fight them they'll kill you. There's another layer of instinct when you know they want to kill you. What are you thinking of doing as a comic? Which bit is grabbing you 

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