[Report This]Date: March 19 2026 6:33 PM Title: #11 - Wr8
Oh damn, so the black mark seems to have its own set of powers? Things are escalating even more. Fantastic pov chapter! The part where she showed him all her past "trophies" was probably my favorite. His poor sister will probably blame herself though...
Thank you for the chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for checking in on things, glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: March 19 2026 4:29 PM Title: #1 - In Robin We Trust
I understand your concern, but I genuinely enjoyed your story. If anything I said came across the wrong way, I sincerely apologize. As for my work on DA, those are some of my older pieces. If you’re open to it, you can connect with me on Discord I can show you my recent work there, which I believe you’ll like much more. I can also share a proper review of your story there, so you can be sure that I’ve actually read it and truly see strong potential in it as a comic. That’s the reason I suggested the idea in the first place. You are genuinely a commendable writer, and I hope you’ll consider connecting with me on Discord. I’d really enjoy continuing this conversation and seeing more of your story as you keep writing.
Author's Response:
I meant what I said, and for that reason I'm really disappointed you continue to lie. Your review was a copy and paste on every recent story that day. And I already know you personalized review will simply be AI as well, I've encountered enough of that.
I still mean what I said, you got skill, don't let yourself rot away doing this.
[Report This]Date: March 19 2026 3:39 PM Title: #11 - Wr8
Wow, what a fascinating and gruesome pair of chapters. First, with the last one it definitely feels like ChadBug is aware of more than they're letting on as to whatever the heck is going on with Robin.
Dovetailing into the rather pulpy reveal of Simon's fate and the thoughts that inhabit wr8 is equally fascinating, with some rather alluring bits of psychological torment mixed with physical abuse at her hands and feet. It's very fascinating to see just how in-control of herself she is, and how effortlessly she's able to see through people and manipulate those to her will. It does make me wonder a bit what caused her to lose her composure enough to let the mask slip enough to the group and Robin to let herself be ostracized, yet still want to continue to play the game of... converting her? Letting her loose? Whatever her final plan is. Either way, thank you so much for the chapters, they were wonderful to read!
[Report This]Date: March 17 2026 5:16 PM Title: #1 - In Robin We Trust
Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is avablaise_98 ) or by email (avablaise9@gmail.com). Hope to hear from you soon
Author's Response:
I've seen enough of these comments to know you didn't read it, and usually I would simply deleted it.
But I will say, I checked out your DA page, and beside some of the usages of AI, you're not a bad artist in the parts that look genuinely yours. I don't think I'll commission anything tough, due to me not liking these callous copy paste adverts, sorry.
But hey, keep it up, don't lose trust in the skill you've already build up, don't let AI make you complacent, and maybe don't lie to people like this.
Wishing you all the best.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2026 10:45 PM Title: #10 - Lullaby
Genuinely really interesting development. And you updated so fast too! Amazingly written, I love the pacing and the progress of the story. Elias is digging their own grave at this point, but can you even blame him?
Thanks for the chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for keeping up so closely with it too.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2026 10:55 AM Title: #9 - Four Calls
Things are definitely escalating. Poor Elias. The whole stomach section was very hot and written really well! Thank you for the update as always.
Author's Response:
Thank you for checking out, glad you like the stomach part, was so hot writing that.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2026 10:27 AM Title: #9 - Four Calls
Very fascinating, Robin's playing with fire. It's clear the conflict within her is causing her to waver back and forth between what she knows she should do, and what she strives to be. The 'I can fix her' part of me as well as the part of me that loves happy endings hopes desperately that she'll be able to somehow keep her feelings in check... but at the moment it feels like she's just one catastrophic event from the last threads of her humanity snapping and indulging in her dark desires, and once that happens she really won't be able to stop.
Another lovely chapter, I enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response:
I like that tension too, but can't keep something like that going forever, at some point soon, it's gotta tip into her being safe, or collapse into a massacre. Unless I play the cards up my sleeve carefully.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2026 8:43 AM Title: #9 - Four Calls
An incredibly compelling read. One of the only stories that makes me regularly check in for updates. 10/10.
I'm
definitely rooting for Elias and his friends to make it through this
all in one piece. Perhaps successfully escaping and find sanctuary
elsewhere? Yet another part of me yearns to read about Robin creaming
herself while inflicting unspeakable physical cruelty and torture upon
the already mentally anguished little guy. I'm a little fucked in the
head like Robin because nothing is hotter to me than the complete and
total betrayal of a loving friend or family member by a cruel and
twisted woman living out her sadistic desires. Also the best victims in
this regard are always the most undeserving, like our overly-trusting little friend group here.
Perhaps as a middle
ground we could delve into a few vivid wet dreams of messed up things she'd like
to do to Elias and the others? She's got to be increasingly pent
up and on edge from holding herself back around them, right? Imagine
dealing with such dark urges for years, unhealthily savouring the
memories of her first accidental killing while sating her unfulfilled
fantasies with online fetish media and communities... To then have such a
golden opportunity land in her lap, literally handing itself over to
her. Her frustration must be through the roof from denying herself the urges and
experiences she's craved for years now. Some pretty fucked up
fantasies must be boiling away beneath the surface, the pressure
steadily mounting...
Author's Response:
It's really nice to see you post a review here too <3
Yes, the idea of betrayal and the least deserving victim making it the hottest is something I fully get. I originally started this story from my own POV as someone often imagining themselves in the power role, in that way Robin became a sort of self-insert of how I would handle being as I am if others were really in my hands.
I'll see what I can do in terms of dream or fantasy scenarios, but right now I think I have a few world building and plot points I wanna hit in the next few chapters.
[Report This]Date: March 14 2026 6:21 PM Title: #8 - Others Like Her
What a cool way to do world building! That intro sequence was amazing as well. I love these characters already and I barely know them! Lucky trEatmegently lol - thank you for the update as always, I'm really curious to see how everything develops, especially this "lullaby" and the superhero stuff haha
Author's Response:
Thank you, very excited to explore all these stranger elements, while also doing my best to keep things grounded.
[Report This]Date: March 14 2026 1:13 PM Title: #8 - Others Like Her
Another excellent chapter! It's very curious to see how Robin interacts with like-minded folks and how much she's 'let them in' so to speak. It's also interesting to see that she is willing to reveal as much as she has; this already burned her with how wr8 did encroaching into her real life and if we'll see any of the chat members going forward.
Author's Response:
I think in her mind it's two separate worlds, it's why her idea of her humanity hinges on her real-life friends.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2026 7:57 AM Title: #7 - Medusa
Another wonderful chapter. I think the juxtaposition of her normal, boring, relatable life and her descent (?) into the monster she's trying to not embrace is fascinating. I think the tension between everyone, especially Robin and Elias feels very real and palpable and I genuinely don't know how things are going to end up, which makes for a gripping time as I read, so again thank you for coming up with another one.
Either way, reading this has definitely inspired me and while I don't usually feel much motivation for solo writing I'm going to make an effort to get down at least a one-shot. I look forward to seeing where Grim Keeper goes from here!
[Report This]Date: March 11 2026 3:59 AM Title: #7 - Medusa
Oof. Elias must be really hurting right now. Really great to get some more insight. It's difficult for Robin as well, but we all know who really is in danger in this situation. Can't wait to see how everything will develop further, thank you for the update!
Author's Response: Thank you as always for you support.
Date: March 10 2026 8:47 PM Title: #6 - Monster
I love this chapter. I’ve also loved when the evil, narcissistic giantess is found out by someone she truly cares about. The psychology of her demented side being seen by some she loves and what she should do about it so rich to me. I think she didn’t have it in her to truly end Elias. The satisfaction probably wasn’t worth the trouble and little heartache she may have felt from it, no matter what he said. Interesting to see if that changes in the future. What is more important to her: power/self-satisfaction or the love she has for her friends. Which side of her wins out? Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for enjoying it, betrayal that feels real is the hottest kind, isn't it?
[Report This]Date: March 10 2026 6:13 AM Title: #6 - Monster
Another absolutely wonderful set of chapters. The slow but certain escalation and looming threats, both figurative and literal are gripping. Thank you again for writing such a wonderful story and we've definitely been spoiled with the rapid pace they've been coming out.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I've been writing throughout pretty much all the free time I have, cause I can't get the story out of my head to concentrate on other stuff. I'm honored you keep checking in.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2026 2:20 AM Title: #6 - Monster
Really powerful and hot chapter. I'm glad this wasn't yet the ending for Elias, things might have spiraled out of control otherwise! I'm really curious to see how this will develop. I also loved the intro with the psychologist. 10/10 as always!
Author's Response:
Thank you, felt good to finally get some classic interaction in.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2026 5:11 PM Title: #5 - Elias
Wow! What a chapter and what a cliffhanger! Things are getting really, really interesting. Thank you for updating, as always!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the investment <3
[Report This]Date: March 09 2026 3:34 AM Title: #1 - In Robin We Trust
Really exceptional
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: March 07 2026 1:49 AM Title: #4 - Jade & Theo
Amazing characterization and pacing, wow. Probably my favorite chapter so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I was a little scared the current day socially elements would scare some people off, and the trauma response would be too heavy.
Glad to hear you liked it.
[Report This]Date: March 07 2026 12:17 AM Title: #4 - Jade & Theo
This has rapidly become my favorite story as of late. I'm really enjoying the slow burn and most realistic perspective of everyone involved; while having a big amoral smut goddess can be nice I really like Robin's lurking dark urges and how they'll conflict with her new role in her friends' lives. I look forward to each and every update, thank you so much for writing!
Author's Response:
That is so movivating to hear, I'm happy you share my like for a slower build-up and character focus.
[Report This]Date: March 04 2026 5:27 AM Title: #3 - Oscar
And it begins! Wow, you write really fast, amazing chapter as always!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for being a fan.