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Reviewer: Makermanman99 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2026 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Promise

I’m so glad I found the story. It was such a wonderful read.  The relationship between Ale and Clara is refreshing. It’s rare to see a mature older brother having an actual relationship with their sister. 
The writing is very easy to read in the story was very easy to follow. 
I hope you continue writing. Can’t wait to see what happens next!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

There is still much more to come.

And yes, most of size fetish stories have the downside to have complete assholes/psychopaths as characters. I don't actually like that.

I wanted to create a genuine dynamic where most of the characters are likeable and relatable, so most of them will be actual decent and nice people.

Reviewer: frenchfri Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2026 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Promise

I’m really enjoying this story and hope Clara continues to grow in size and weight. The size comparison descriptions are also well done. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words.

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