[Report This]Date: February 18 2026 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow okay I like were this is going so far this princess definitely reminds me of a character from an anime but I can’t remember who exactly
yune is a fun character definitely plays into the innocent, but very powerful archetype of a MC
the side characters are very interesting and The plot is getting better and better every chapter
Things that can improve I’ll say the dialogue could be a little bit more tighter but has improved and Yune could maybe not mention she’s an ordinary girl multiple times it can get a little repetitive.
but overall pretty good stuff here and very interested to see where everything goes next
Author's Response:
Thanks again for your feedback.
[Report This]Date: February 17 2026 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hmmmm very interesting concept the dialogue could be a little bit better and a little bit more sharper, but overall pretty consistent storytelling and I’ll also say the size description can be inconsistent at few times but still pretty good
overall nice work
Author's Response:
Thank you for your feedback. I will take your suggestions into account.
[Report This]Date: February 16 2026 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hello did you make your mind?
Author's Response:
I don't need it now.
[Report This]Date: February 11 2026 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws
Author's Response:
Thank you for your feedback. I'll think about your suggestion.