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Reviewer: Big Z Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2010 2:00 AM Title: Happy time

I'm definitely interested to see where this story will go.

Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2010 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 exploring

This story has good potential. However, please consider separating paragraphs. If it is just one big block, it's horrible to read. Also, it's good to just wait until you have a real full-fledged chapter until you post it.

But I'll be watching this story!

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