[Report This]Date: March 16 2026 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
Like the others, this one was a beautiful journey, and I enjoyed following it to the end.
I'm sure the new parents will have a lot to do raising twenty little girls, especially given how quickly they'll grow up, but I'm sure they'll have fun along the way. XD
As for Nekomi, it's obviously necessary to keep her on a leash, but I can't help but imagine what would happen if she managed to regain her freedom.
Maybe she'd even find a little lover (to be treated well, not like Ren in his little spin-off). I know it's unlikely, but I can't help but imagine it.
In any case, congratulations on completing your first story; it must be very satisfying.
Author's Response:
Thank you as always Drake <3 I am glad you were able to join in on this adventure!!! :3 And it was satisfying xD thank you!!!
Date: March 15 2026 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
First thing I wanna say is congrats on completing the first story you've written on this website. It's been a great journey.
So, I guess Nekomi is stuck with Ren and Kit, looks like she will be a great babysitter. And jeez Kit is just itching for more kids, I wonder how many they will have. At the end it furthers my view that Kit and Ren is the best couple you have written thus far.
Author's Response:
Thank you as always Planet!!! It has been a great journey :3 thank you for joining me for it!
[Report This]Date: March 15 2026 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
Ah, all’s well that ends well. This was a great story! I guess in the end Nekomi kinda ended up being in Kit and Ren’s custody actually haha. Hope she becomes the cool aunt to all the kids. Looks like they’re gonna be celebrating A LOT of birthdays in the near future.
Author's Response:
Thank you Scholar <3 I'm glad you were here for the ride!!! :3
Date: March 08 2026 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 12
Awesome Chapter!!!!
Surprised that Ren had it in him to keep going, but still I have to imagine that Nekomi heard everything. That’s gotta be awkward.
So the kitsunes are female only and can have 20 kids at once. That’s gotta be a handful. At least Ren and Kit have an army if the other gods confront them.
Can’t wait for the finale!
Author's Response:
Thank you Planet <3 it has been an honor to have you throughout this journey!!!
Date: February 22 2026 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 10
AHAHAHAHA. Finally, the finding out part of fucking around!
Author's Response:
Thank you Zen <3
This was definitely a cathartic chapter to write hahahahahahaha!
Date: February 22 2026 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great Chapter. This is the best one yet!
1. Looks like Nekomi is not as tough as she thought. Pretty satisfying when Kit put her in her place.
2. I wonder if Kit is one of the more powerful gods in the story.
3. Will it be explained why Kit was small for centuries?
4. I am excited to see the dynamic with the three characters now.
Like I said amazing work.
I hope I'm not bothering you by reviewing here and on Size Fiction.
Author's Response:
You could never bother me with your reviews, Planet! <3
These are some really good questions! Some will be revealed in future chapters, though there is some worldbuilding I've done for this story that has/will only be hinted at! If you're really curious and you have a Discord, definitely send me a message at arkoengts
[Report This]Date: February 15 2026 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
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Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: February 07 2026 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws
[Report This]Date: February 03 2026 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 7
The joint custody hope is still alive! Maybe Kit would allow it if she didn’t have any other choice. Here’s hoping everything turns out well for the lovely couple or maybe individual now?
Author's Response:
Hahahahah we'll just say 'complicated' xD
Date: February 01 2026 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
Or they can kill her. Ngl, don't grok the whole third wheel thing here.
Author's Response:
Hahaha that's fair! Kit could absolutely kill Nekomi without toooo much effort, but the pact has prevented her from doing that so far! But I could probably go back and edit that so it's a bit more of a larger point in the conflict! Ty for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: January 25 2026 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hmmm I really wonder what Nekomi has in mind for Ren and what could Kit do about it? It was sweet seeing Kit feel so bad because she thought she failed him and Ren comforting her. We’ll have to see how long Nekomi will wait to shake things up again. Although something mentioned in this chapter makes me think…
Author's Response:
We shall seeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! Thank you!!! xD
[Report This]Date: January 18 2026 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well, as much as I love Ren and Kit's relationship and would be happy to see them end up together at the end of this story, I'm really curious to know how Nekomi would treat him if she managed to get him, even temporarily.
Author's Response: Thank you! Hahaha I don't know if Nekomi would be as gentle as Kit is xD
[Report This]Date: January 10 2026 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well, Ren seems to be in quite the predicament. One goddess that has a slightly disturbing amount of attachment to him and another goddess that says she owns his soul. Best case, maybe they’d agree to joint custody? haha
Author's Response:
LOL HAHAHAHA I don't know if Kit likes sharing xD
[Report This]Date: January 07 2026 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Im very blown away by your descriptive nature and the narrative of this story. A gentle, kind hearted man who had been ground down by the village and the passage of time, weathering with age and each passing year encountering a small Kit, only to have his fortune turn on a fateful day.
Starting off the new year wonderfully with a story as well written and spectacular as this! I hope to see more updates and developments from their interactions and a growing, burning flame of possession and passion from both Ren and Kit, but more so Kit! She definitely seems serious, means business about Ren.
I wonder if the village is going to send a hunt out to find Ren? Try to find a way to deal with the new Kitsune in town, the possibility is endless. Very well crafted story, I will be readily awaiting updates!
Author's Response:
Thank you! There are definitely a lot of possibilities! Chapter 4 will be coming soon!
[Report This]Date: January 02 2026 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
Just absolutely incredible work! Your writing is some of the best I’ve seen. The descriptions of everything so good. Kit (if she can still be called that) is really interesting. She clearly deeply loves Ren, but after her transformation there seems to be some kind of darkness in her too? Very excited to see where this goes!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hahaha she can definitely have a bit of edge to her. Chapter 4 will be coming soon!
Date: January 02 2026 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
This looks to be a great story. Excited to see more in the future.
Your writing is definitely one of the best on the site.
Author's Response:
Aww thank you! Glad you're enjoying it!