[Report This]Date: August 16 2026 3:22 PM Title: Fight For Your Right
You have an incredible depiction and use of immersion in your writing.
I’d say one thing that throws me off is the pacing and in your first part Mile High story, it used too many perspective shifts slowing the pace. I personally felt some of the scenes were dragged for a bit too long, same message but said differently kind of scenario.
overall, your writing is amazing and constantly keeps me hooked. Your ability to convey the rawness and perspective feel of giantesses is great
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, I do tend to fall into that trap of getting bogged in each scenario leading to a bit of an overlapping, plodding pace. I will try to work on that in future installments perhaps if I could find the time, a always appreciate a real review that doesn't end with some bot trying to sell me some Ai slop!
Cheers!