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Reviewer: Lemonsquare Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2026 3:22 PM Title: Fight For Your Right

You have an incredible depiction and use of immersion in your writing. 

I’d say one thing that throws me off is the pacing and in your first part Mile High story, it used too many perspective shifts slowing the pace. I personally felt some of the scenes were dragged for a bit too long, same message but said differently kind of scenario.

overall, your writing is amazing and constantly keeps me hooked. Your ability to  convey the rawness and perspective feel of giantesses is great

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