Date: July 25 2013 7:33 AM Title: Uncovering more of the puzzle
A wonderful new chapter! Although, you typed in "Cassandra" where you clearly meant "Sterling replied nervously."
Date: July 09 2013 11:34 AM Title: The Dinner Date
"Just desserts?!"
Yes! That's my kind of pun. :-)
Thanks for finally updating this story. And, for proving to Amanda the veracity of that old saying: "Just because you're paranoid doesn't mean there's nobody really out to get you."
Date: May 04 2010 10:26 AM Title: Cassandra's Offer
Hmmmmm! If Cassandra is really determined to milk her star-making trick, for all its worth, I don't think she's going to let Amanda stop her.
I can't wait to whether or not chapter 5 proves me wrong! ;-)
Date: May 03 2010 10:00 AM Title: The next morning
Poor Bobby (lol)! With his luck, he'll probably wind up being kidnapped by a teenage girl purse-snatcher!!
Date: April 28 2010 6:41 PM Title: Later that night
Great story so far... Glad to see your still writing. Loved your other stuff and everything. Big fan can't wait too see what your do next.
Aaron
Date: April 27 2010 10:29 AM Title: Later that night
Bobby's right. He DOESN'T know better!
X-D
Date: April 26 2010 7:15 PM Title: The magic trick
Absolutely great story! And, the moral of it? Never bad-mouth a beautiful magician in a tight black leotard. Especially, when she's your "hex" girlfriend!
Date: April 25 2010 6:25 PM Title: The magic trick
this was a really great story. I usually am not a huge fan of stories dealing with magic but this one was so cleverly written, and pieced together. Well done my friend.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. This story might not be over yet though. I might add more to it.