



[Report This]Date: July 25 2013 7:33 AM Title: Uncovering more of the puzzle
A wonderful new chapter! Although, you typed in "Cassandra" where you clearly meant "Sterling replied nervously."




[Report This]Date: July 09 2013 11:34 AM Title: The Dinner Date
"Just desserts?!"
Yes! That's my kind of pun. :-)
Thanks for finally updating this story. And, for proving to Amanda the veracity of that old saying: "Just because you're paranoid doesn't mean there's nobody really out to get you."




[Report This]Date: May 04 2010 10:26 AM Title: Cassandra's Offer
Hmmmmm! If Cassandra is really determined to milk her star-making trick, for all its worth, I don't think she's going to let Amanda stop her.
I can't wait to whether or not chapter 5 proves me wrong! ;-)




[Report This]Date: May 03 2010 10:00 AM Title: The next morning
Poor Bobby (lol)! With his luck, he'll probably wind up being kidnapped by a teenage girl purse-snatcher!!




[Report This]Date: April 28 2010 6:41 PM Title: Later that night
Great story so far... Glad to see your still writing. Loved your other stuff and everything. Big fan can't wait too see what your do next.
Aaron




[Report This]Date: April 27 2010 10:29 AM Title: Later that night
Bobby's right. He DOESN'T know better!
X-D




[Report This]Date: April 26 2010 7:15 PM Title: The magic trick
Absolutely great story! And, the moral of it? Never bad-mouth a beautiful magician in a tight black leotard. Especially, when she's your "hex" girlfriend!




[Report This]Date: April 25 2010 6:25 PM Title: The magic trick
this was a really great story. I usually am not a huge fan of stories dealing with magic but this one was so cleverly written, and pieced together. Well done my friend.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. This story might not be over yet though. I might add more to it.