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Reviewer: NebulaDoodles Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2026 10:18 PM Title: CH1: Seen and Not Heard

Hi, I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your the title immediately caught my attention, but the story itself went beyond all my expectations. Your storytelling is outstanding, and the characters are incredibly well developed. As I finished reading, I couldn't help but imagine how amazing this story would look as a comic. The more I thought about it, the more convinced I became that it would shine in that format. A little about me I'm a professional artist specializing in a range of styles, and I work on commission. If you're interested, I'd love to discuss the idea of adapting your story into a comic. Feel free to reach out to me through email, Discord.


Discord: nebuladoodles

Email: luckiest297@gmail.com

Reviewer: Gunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2026 11:04 PM Title: CH1: Seen and Not Heard

Just found this story on here, it's pretty good! You do good characterization, and pick out some great tropes/dynamics that really makes the story great. Interested what you have planned for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2026 1:58 PM Title: CH1: Seen and Not Heard

Happy New Year, as well!  :-)

Reviewer: Curvograph Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2025 8:33 PM Title: CH4: Applied Learning

I feel I am late to the party, we are already four chapters into the story. A mesmerising read, so little happens yet so much! The tension is everpresent and both main characters find themselves immersed in a truly bizarre scenario. Your attention to details and minor gestures is most commendable as each scene is vivid and palpable.

Merry Xmas!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2025 7:22 PM Title: CH4: Applied Learning

So, I think it's safe to say that Ms. Finch is about to let more than her hair down.  ;-)


Merry Xmas!



Author's Response:

Yessir! And Merry Christmas too!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2025 3:48 AM Title: CH3: Sole Curriculum

I read all three chapters in one sitting.  They were that good!

Ms. Finch is the sexiest domineering teacher I've read about, this side of Writing.com.  Thanks for sharing this with us...and Happy Holidays!




Author's Response:

Damn, that is some high praise. Thank-you! Hope you enjoy the fourth chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2025 3:26 AM Title: CH3: Sole Curriculum

I’m loving the direction this story is taking. She is using him as a “study experiment” of some sort. I like how she carefully chooses her words to make it seem professional despite the reality of treating him like her toy. 

This teacher seems smart too and well calculated. I like how she has this plan for Jax and we don’t seem to know it yet which makes it such a fun mystery. 

I also like Jax’s fear and helplessness as Ms. Finch simply decides what will happen to him. Also, the ending where she states that things will be hands-on is perfect! 

I can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you're enjoying her twisted teaching. The hands-on lessons are finally getting started in chapter 4!

Reviewer: Bonnie Blackmoor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2025 1:55 AM Title: CH1: Seen and Not Heard

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Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Tiny Drake Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2025 5:48 PM Title: CH3: Sole Curriculum

Hey, I just wanted to say that I find your story very interesting and entertaining. I can't wait to see what happens next for your two protagonists.

Good job!



Author's Response:

Thanks, appreciate it!

Reviewer: gentle bbw Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2025 8:31 PM Title: CH2: Protocols of Possession

I hope little Jax and Mrs. Finch have a beautiful, loving, cuddly love life together, especially at night in Mrs. Finch's bed with lots of cuddling and kissing.



Author's Response:

Yeah it'll be something like that.. Kinda.. Thanks for the review. Hope you enjoy the newest chapter, but chapter 4 will be the one you're looking forward to the most.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2025 5:53 AM Title: CH2: Protocols of Possession

Yes! I love giantess teacher stories with a shrunken student! 

I also like how you included different perspectives so we can see how each of them perceive each situation! 

In addition, I like the thoughts that each person as this unfolds and it makes this more interesting as she takes him and makes this risk. The whole time we see Mrs. Finch’s viewpoint, we see how she processes the thought of taking Jax and I think we might see her confidence grow as she decides to keep him. 


Now I’m more excited about how she plans to play or handle Jax as her tiny student. Since I already see the tags listed in this story, I have high hopes for a great story! 


I can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Ayy thank you for the review. Appreciate it. I'm glad you're enjoying the dual perspectives and I hope the next chapter lives up to your expectations!

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