Date: February 07 2026 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A trade deal
As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws
[Report This]Date: January 02 2026 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - A trade deal
Looking forward to the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: January 02 2026 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - A trade deal
Looking forward to the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: December 08 2025 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1 - A trade deal
A very interesting start! Shall see where it goes!
And of course it will be interesting to see the in story lore for why the Terkirians have heels for apparently religious reasons(and why they are evidently bad at walking in them, or don't use their tech to fix it), bonus is what the thoughts on wedges or other heel types are (even either Zero Two’s or portal Long fall boots or others).
Also eventually learn why Earth isn't making or have a Dyson sphere/swarm and star lifting for raw material and system defence (though it is only the late 2050s, it might tale a little bit longer). I have no doubt Earth is trying to make counters considering the initial incident.
And, were here having macro/microphila for years IRL, so the Terkirians are most likely have had it too, how did out and their communities interact in this time (which I also have no doubt will come up)
And also learn about what other and apparently larger aliens are out there.
Can’t wait to see!