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Reviewer: HandedOver Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2026 6:46 PM Title: Micronization

I really like this whole story concept, your writing style, and how the story is progressing. Great work, can't wait for mire

Reviewer: gentle bbw Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2025 6:00 AM Title: The Lounge Customers

I really liked chapter 3 too. And maybe little Niel will be crushed or assaulted by the swollen genitals.

Reviewer: Leaf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2025 3:48 AM Title: Micronization

Fantastic, love the helplessness and humiliation. Too many of those types of stories go for crush so I’m glad to see this without. Also like the FM/m scenes, too few authors go for it.



Author's Response: Thank you! I agree, happy to provide!

Reviewer: Pnwpaddleboarder Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2025 1:35 AM Title: Micronization

Fantastic story so far! I look forward to seeing where this all goes 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: miniscule Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2025 8:08 AM Title: Micronization

Great first two chapters. Hopefully, our protagonist will have an adventure in the clit ring in Subsequent chapters.  Very original story and well written! 

Reviewer: gentle bbw Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27 2025 5:26 AM Title: Mei Lin's silver ring

Good start. But something would have to happen where the shrunken man stays that small forever, and he is trapped in this brothel forever, and all the women, including the madam, love him and want him in their bed, and he stays with them forever.

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