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Reviewer: flumsyarts Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2026 5:23 PM Title: Micronization


Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic.


Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level!


Feel free to reach out to me via Discord aeroo_draws Hope to hear from you soon

Reviewer: Leaf Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2026 1:24 PM Title: Second Night at the Club

Nice chapter! I think my favorite part was the bit at the end where he had to drink her discharge. There’s just something so hot about it.

Reviewer: Avenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2026 11:20 PM Title: Micronization

As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws

Reviewer: Leaf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2026 1:44 AM Title: Micronization

Love this chapter, the blowjob scene was well done. Hopefully the misunderstanding continues.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: HandedOver Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2026 6:46 PM Title: Micronization

I really like this whole story concept, your writing style, and how the story is progressing. Great work, can't wait for mire



Author's Response:

So encouraging, thank you!

Reviewer: gentle bbw Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2025 6:00 AM Title: The Lounge Customers

I really liked chapter 3 too. And maybe little Niel will be crushed or assaulted by the swollen genitals.

Reviewer: Leaf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2025 3:48 AM Title: Micronization

Fantastic, love the helplessness and humiliation. Too many of those types of stories go for crush so I’m glad to see this without. Also like the FM/m scenes, too few authors go for it.



Author's Response: Thank you! I agree, happy to provide!

Reviewer: Pnwpaddleboarder Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2025 1:35 AM Title: Micronization

Fantastic story so far! I look forward to seeing where this all goes 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: miniscule Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2025 8:08 AM Title: Micronization

Great first two chapters. Hopefully, our protagonist will have an adventure in the clit ring in Subsequent chapters.  Very original story and well written! 

Reviewer: gentle bbw Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27 2025 5:26 AM Title: Mei Lin's silver ring

Good start. But something would have to happen where the shrunken man stays that small forever, and he is trapped in this brothel forever, and all the women, including the madam, love him and want him in their bed, and he stays with them forever.

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