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Reviewer: tinyonej Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: April 25 2010 1:02 AM Title: The being of the end of Cathie

English isn't your first language is it? Like safety said good idea but getting past the poor grammar and sentence structure is frustrating.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed star [Report This]
Date: April 22 2010 7:04 PM Title: The being of the end of Cathie

Good idea, but poorly written.
Suggest you write paragraphs.
Connecting sentences, not just point form events.

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