Reviews For My Little Fantasy
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Reviewer: Vandenpalmetto Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2016 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Maid to Order

I love the story it's really good I just hope you'll finish it someday 

Reviewer: Gregojaoak Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2016 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Home

Great read, when will it be updated?

Reviewer: thomaterrich Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2014 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Home

Could you please finish the story?

Reviewer: hate floats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Maid to Order

I really like where this is headed, hope to see more soon!!!

Reviewer: dman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2010 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Maid to Order

Excellent story, the author is great but a quick search online shows that this story was started in 1999 and so, I guess I'm not holding up my hopes for its finish or any additional chapters. Unless the other decided to come back.

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2010 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Maid to Order

awesome start

Reviewer: DToxic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Maid to Order

Loving it so far, can't wait for the rest. As others have said, the protagonist kind of stands out and feels fairly different from the usual humble narrators.

Also, just wondering; was the use of terms like "cyberware" and "datajack" an intentional reference to Shadowrun?

Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Maid to Order

Excellent!  I love where this story is going and cant wait to see what happens when he renocounters his Giantess Step Sister and Step Mother

Reviewer: Tinyman305 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Maid to Order

I like the concept.   Cant wait to see what happens to him

Reviewer: Knot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Home

Very well done so far, you have a real knack for storytelling. The protagonist had a definite voice that makes this a pleasure to read. Love the set up, love the micro, can't wait to see where you take it.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Maid to Order

Very nice start and you've managed to make this story somehow believable, well done. Love the interactions that is happening throughout this story, keep it up. My only gripe is the he was shrunken down to 1/2 an inch, would rather him to be 2 inches, but just my preference. Also hope in the later chapters that there will be some detailed bare foot scenes(toenail color, size, and overall prettiness of them, etc.).
Ps wondering if stepmom (Lydia) uses maid's shrinking powers for herself?
Anyways sorry for rambling on like that,
Aaron

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2010 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Maid to Order

unique start so far. Very well written story. I will be eagerly waiting for the third chapter.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Maid to Order

Good start with lots of potential.
Looking forward to Chapter 3.

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