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Reviewer: Avenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2026 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws

Reviewer: Giana Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2025 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 5

This is a wonderfully unique and engaging story; your creative blend of Pokémon training with such a distinctive, character-driven power dynamic is truly compelling. I'm deeply curious as Susie's growth and power become increasingly tied to Rachel's fascination, will their partnership evolve into something even more symbiotic, or could Rachel's devotion eventually risk being her undoing?


Reviewer: Giana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2025 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

This is such a creative and entertaining chapter that masterfully blends Pokemon training with character growth and unique battle mechanics! I love how Rachel and Susie's bond deepens through their shared victories and Susie's evolving abilities. I'm genuinely curious about how Susie's continued growth both in size and power will impact their dynamic, especially as they enter the more competitive environment of the Hearthome Gym.

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