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Reviewer: TheTinySecondD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2025 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love this opening. The part with the straw is amazing! Also a good build up and switch to tease both the characters starting stories. Leaves the audience, well.. me, wanting to know all 3 parts to it all. The past tales and the current ones going on.

Just like with Pearl, you have a real gift at writing from the micro prospective. I hope this is the start of your comeback, the size fetish world needs your creativity in it. 

Also, no clue if your email is still the same with your bio, but if so I wanted to share something with you.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate it! I'm going to be working on both stories after Xmas as I'm just too busy working at the moment. But I hope I can continue to please, I love writing the micro perspectives a lot! 

And if you want to share something to that email address, I'll try logging into it later! 

Thanks again! 

Reviewer: Nesslilly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2025 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a fun story so far; getting introduced with two shrinking scenes in one chapter is such a treat! Especially with such callous big people being around for both the luckily unfortunate Tinies. I do hope we'll eventually learn more on how Ben and Sara actually met. Or at least where/how Sara left Coco in the dust. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! And yes we'll be learning more on Ben and Sara's back story in due course! 

Please feel free to check out my other story, Pearl! 

Thanks! 

Reviewer: AIumni Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 01 2025 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very solid introduction, though it jumps around a lot. Still, great stuff and since all the exposition has been handled for the most part I can anticipate what comes next will be pretty straightforward.

Glad to see you writing again! I was a big fan of Marlee and Emma--I would love to see that story revived. If you are open to chatting with other writers I'm also open to that as well~



Author's Response:

Thank you - admittedly it's a little rough but I'll be editing it as I go along to flesh it out more.

I accidentally deleted Marlene & Emma, I'm sure I've still got a copy of it somewhere and I'll repost if there's interest in reviving the story.

Thabks for the feedback! 

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