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Reviewer: NUB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2025 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent start so far - keep it up! 

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2025 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow this was good start I think you should have dialogue should be more spread out so it’s easier to read but overall great work 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I do think I am struggling with dialogue. I am working on to improve it.

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