Date: February 07 2026 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws
[Report This]Date: January 03 2026 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely horrifying, I applaud you, sir.
If it's in the cards, I wonder if there'll ever be the time when the character had enough and goes for one daring escape out of Annique's mouth. And he actually succeeds, barely. Eventually, he got Annique's attention and that's where he confesses his crush and love for her, maybe make his time in her fleshy prison developed a newfound respect for her when they, I don't know, get married in the near future?
Honestly would love to think about Annique's realization when that annoying crumb at the back of her teeth, turned out to be her shrunken colleague by some miracle of the light. She would get a new perspective about the unique quirks of her orifice in excruciating detail from her unofficial prisoner
Anyways, that's enough fetishized ramblings from me. Thank you for these stories and may the next chapter be a blast! :)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. If I do keep writing I doubt the ending will be a happy one, but we’ll see
Date: January 02 2026 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
I could live in your story, memorize your lines and close my eyes to feel teleported to the immeasurable mouth of Annique. Your ability to describe feelings, environments and actions are second to none. Thank you for keep writing stories that makes us closer to our fantasies :)
If you're taking suggests for an epilogue, I'd like to see Annique's pov of the annoying crumb bugging her between her teeth during a normal day until she eventually, finally frees 'it' from between her teeth. She even checks on 'it' but 'it' is so incredibly small she can't tell what it is, licking 'it' back inside thinking it was a piece of food.
Author's Response: Thanks so much- this is definitely some of my best work.
[Report This]Date: December 30 2025 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is my favorite thing you've written!! I've enjoyed all your stories but chapter 1 and especially 2 of this one are amazing. I love detailed stories of someone suffering and getting tortured from mundane functions of the body, and the way you write about and describe the smelly and horrifying things about Annique's mouth for him is amazing. I'd love to maybe see a continuation with him experiencing his worst day in her mouth. Maybe she didn't brush the night before and forgets to in the morning, is gassier than usual and lets out horrible belches, etc. But that's just an idea. Whatever you decide to do with this story or the next story you write, I can't wait to read it! Thank you for writing
Author's Response: Really glad you enjoyed it. Certainly gives me some food for thought; if I ever do decide to give this story a continuation, I’ll keep your ideas in mind.
Date: November 15 2025 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
It's always so refreshing to read anything from you <3
Author's Response:
Always refreshing to see my long term reviewers are still around. More to come soon
[Report This]Date: October 27 2025 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start love the premise
Author's Response:
Thank you, this is a new kind of story for me
Date: October 27 2025 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Z tier story, hope you will create more
Author's Response:
Thank you, part 2 shouldn’t be too far away