More of a scenario than an actual story, but still a nice read.   Descriptions of the setting would make it better, in addition to maybe some background information about the main characters and how they ended up where they are, how they met, more information about the world in which they live, why she's so big and he's so small.   Clean up the spelling mistakes, break the lines into paragraphs, and this could be a more enjoyable read.   Nice start.   I look forward to seeing more by this author.