[Report This]Date: November 02 2025 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh boy the main event!
Author's Response:
The main event!
[Report This]Date: October 27 2025 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
Really looking forward to his exit, hopefully it's got some good detail! Really loving this story so far, I've been on this site for years and finally made an account so I could favorite and leave a review for this story!
Author's Response:
I appreciate the kind words! Glad you are enjoying it.
Date: October 24 2025 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
Nice. I Really hope he oversleeps so the possible event I mentioned in a previous post happens.
Also...he was so close to being taken out by that fart, for a moment I thought he would be seperated by the pod completely. Nice work.
Author's Response: Danger close! He was lucky for sure.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2025 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: October 23 2025 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Im continuing to follow this story. Love how she gets busy and forgets about him. I would prefer longer chapters since you have it written out, it makes it flow better to me instead of stopping. Could do his view and hers in one chapter instead of 2. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
That's fair. Glad you're enjoying. As of today what's been posted is about 75% of the story. I've got part II planned out (but not yet written), and debating if I wan't to make it a second story or extend the current one and revise the chapters to be longer/combined. Thanks for the feedback.
[Report This]Date: October 19 2025 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoying this story so far. Loved the setup of chapter 4 and can't wait for the next one
[Report This]Date: October 18 2025 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow I’m really liking this story
[Report This]Date: October 17 2025 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter, I like the don't care attitude she has after finding out what happened. Please dont keep us waiting too long!
Author's Response:
She's had enough of his shenanigans!
Date: October 17 2025 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
Nice. I kind of hope his wife doesn't see him and flushes...only for him to go through the sewer to the water treatment facility then co ti ue on his way to another girls cup of water and swallowed again.
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying so far!
[Report This]Date: October 17 2025 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice work so far! You open to story requests? If so, how do I contact you?
Author's Response:
Unfortunately I don't take story requests. Honestly surprised I was able to even write a whole one to begin with. Glad you've enjoyed the read so far, there's more to come!
[Report This]Date: October 08 2025 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey! Just wanted to say I seriously hope you go through with this story and keep it unaware. I could not say enough how much I appreciate the start and the approach for this story as I’ve been begging someone to do an unaware swallowed in a pill adventure. I’m excited for what’s to come but please keep it going!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind review. I have this story written out, just going chapter by chapter to add detail and refine. Hopefully you'll be satisfied with the direction it takes.
I'm also planning a sequal and also a third story. Those are not written but the plot is there.
[Report This]Date: October 07 2025 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start, love unaware scenarios as well, you described his wife perfectly and I cant wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it. Hopefully you'll enjoy the rest as much!
[Report This]Date: October 07 2025 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it! Can’t wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad to hear it! I should have the next chapter posted soon. Shooting for no later than end of day Friday.