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Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2025 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey! Just wanted to say I seriously hope you go through with this story and keep it unaware.  I could not say enough how much I appreciate the start and the approach for this story as I’ve been begging someone to do an unaware swallowed in a pill adventure.  I’m excited for what’s to come but please keep it going!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind review. I have this story written out, just going chapter by chapter to add detail and refine. Hopefully you'll be satisfied with the direction it takes.

I'm also planning a sequal and also a third story. Those are not written but the plot is there.

Reviewer: Aac101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2025 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great start, love unaware scenarios as well, you described his wife perfectly and I cant wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it. Hopefully you'll enjoy the rest as much!

Reviewer: Moomoomilk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2025 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it! Can’t wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad to hear it! I should have the next chapter posted soon. Shooting for no later than end of day Friday.

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