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Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2025 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was cute story. Short and sweet. I like that Lilly's playfulness was just simple fun and she was devastated when she thought she'd killed Liam.  Then switching back to playfulness when she noticed the effect of her kiss on him.



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Reviewer: Ryebread9600 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2025 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing 



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