Date: June 19 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just wanna let you know, this was the story that blew my mind and made me want to write. This is art.
Author's Response:
Really!!! wow thank you so much...thats such a kind thing to say,i often doubt myself,unsure if i should be sharing such intimate dark secrets with the world.Scares me sometimes...i can't help,i often wonder if i could be that evil to end the life of another inside my tummy....
take care
Amanda xxx
Date: April 11 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi Amanda, I Like this Story so far! And though a little confused about is this being coauthored with Banfield or No, Cause he posted it as well though under a different title Anacrophobia, And I noticed he said in his review to be patience is a virtue, So I'm hoping theres more comming and you posted early! Thank You for all your wonderful Works to both of You!
Author's Response:
Mmm i have noticed his entry? the story is complete it was written on impulse its a little different but still vore of sorts,i did not describe what she was becauce in my minds eye she is still a woman with a very strange appetite hehe,glad you enjoyed it.
Amanda.
Date: April 08 2010 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Amanda, patience is a virtue, possess it if you can; seldom in a woman, never in a man.
Author's Response:
A poet as well mmm you would be an interesting meal.
Amanda.
Date: April 08 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
O dear, Amanda, if only you could wait until I had emended your excellent yarn which I have done and sent it to you.
Author's Response:
As you have already mentioned banfield i am very impatient,sorry...
XX Amanda.
[Report This]Date: April 07 2010 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
This has the makings of a really awesome story. It is lusciously written, and is enticingly disturbing.
However, it REALLY needs editing. Often times I'm unsure what the meaning is, due to bad sentence structures and punctuation failures. I usually don't bother to comment or rate based on grammar - but I think this could be a magnificent story, if it could be edited for this.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comments i have made changes to the txt, it was poorly written,i would like your opinion on it now,my grammar is not the best xx.
Amanda.