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Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2025 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

A few words possibly got auto-corrected here and there.

Midway through the story, it changes to second person for no reason at all.


Other than that, quite nice.



Author's Response:

Cheers for the note. 


I wrote this using dictate on word, which is less then reliable. I'm also didn't edit it as much as I should've before posting lol. I went through and fix the "second person" issue I think. I hadn't realised I switched, so thanks for pointing it out!

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