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Reviewer: Avenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2026 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shoot Your Shot

As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws

Reviewer: adamantgts Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2025 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shoot Your Shot

Great short story, despite its short length it packs a good amount of power play, if anything you just wish the story kept going a bit longer.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I am definitely thinking about bringing her back for a future piece. There will be more short stories of different styles in this setting. I hope you like those!

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