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Reviewer: erzavale Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2026 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Your story was very interesting to read, and I truly loved it! As I read it, I kept thinking about how it might look as a comic. Please contact me on Discord: erza_vale if you would like to discuss it as a commission project.

Reviewer: ThatGuy21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2026 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi, great story so far, when's the next update? :)

Reviewer: Inthecoil21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2025 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 3

Well Roy is about to have a journey next chapter with that cliff hanger, as this is looking to be a crazy ride he is about to go on



Author's Response:

yep!

Reviewer: FootLover64 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2025 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 2

I think Monika might be the most realistic sibling in these types of stories: not incestuous and also messing with her brother without diving into enslavement, crushed, swallowed, etc.



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2025 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

This one looks very promising!



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: FootLover64 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2025 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Original commissioner here! I'm glad to see its start available to the general public; it's a great one if I do say so myself.



Author's Response:

i think it turned out well too!

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