I think I should leave a review since you're not getting much feedback, even though you should. Most readers just don't give feedback. That's just how it is. It also doesn't help that this site requires people to make an account in order to leave feedback, so that's an extra step that I think blocks a lot of people from giving reviews. Its also why you will sometimes see people say "I made this account in order to say..." and stuff like that. I think things would be better if this site had the ability to leave feedback without having to create an account in order to do so. But that's neither here nor there.

As for the story, I read it, but to be honest it doesn't appeal to me as much as some of your other stories but I felt you should receive some feedback since you're not receiving any, so I'll give you some of my thoughts on it all the same.

The concept of Mega-princesses conquering a planet of small people is a pretty cool idea. But the "Twin" thing seems unnecessary and just kinda ruins it for me. I think the idea could have worked much better if they weren't twins. They could have been sisters (but not twins). One being older than the other, and the two of them having very different personalities. I think that could have been a very cool dynamic. But with them both being twins its a real struggle to try to tell them apart. At that point I think it actually would have worked better if this diplomatic mission had just involved one lone princess. I don't know if any other readers feel the same way as I do on this, but I just have to say I'm not a fan of the "Twins" idea. I just feel its redundant to have two competing characters who are also identical to one another. I can't think of any instance where I've been a fan of twin characters in any sort of work, but that's just my own opinion.

I think it might have been cool if the two princesses weren't even related, or even of the same dynasty. Like, what if there were two or more of these galactic kingdoms and this planet wanted to join one of them, but wasn't sure which, so this diplomatic mission involved two rival princesses from each opposing kingdom trying to convince them that their realm is the better one, and maybe some fighting between them or something.

As for these two Twin Princesses, it was mentioned that they will inherit the realm from their mother. This reminds me of the Roman Emperors Caracalla and Geta who became co-Emperors after their father's death. They discussed dividing the empire in half between themselves, but their mother talked them out of this, and so they each had their own courts and their mother mediated things between them, but this arrangement only lasted for about a year or two until Caracalla murdered his brother and then he became the sole emperor.

I'm not sure if these two Twin Princesses will end up like Caracalla and Geta, but this mentioning of them becoming co-rulers after their mother's death reminded me of that. Two differences they have over Caracalla and Geta which might allow them to work things out where those Roman siblings failed are 1) they're twins. 2) they're females. Maybe that will allow things to work for them. Or maybe not. I don't know.

Okay, so these princesses got to board this luxury spaceship of their mother's which has every amenity but... where are the servants? That was something else I was thinking. Shouldn't there have been a maid and maybe some guard sent along with them, to serve and protect them, respectively? I think those additional characters (and they could be female btw) could have helped alleviate the... let's say "lack of diversity" of these two twin princesses being nearly identical to one another. At this point in the story its probably too late to worry about it now, but I also don't think its been clarified just how large that ship really is, so maybe there is another giant aboard which the Princesses don't even know about? Maybe a spy which their mother secretly assigned to keep an eye on them? Or maybe some unauthorized stowaway?

I kinda hate to say this but... in that part where the one princess had the power glove thing and it seemed as if she might kill the other one.... uh, yeah, part of me kinda hoped that she actually did do that... just to end this whole "Twins" thing. :)

But yeah, it is kinda strange their mother sent them off on this mission with no escort to protect them, AND this ship filled with all these advanced and extremely dangerous weapons. So much could have gone terribly wrong. And for the tiny people on this world, so much actually HAS gone wrong. Maybe the mother felt sure that since these people are so tiny they couldn't pose any threat to her daughters, BUT we know that's not entirely true since they were able to cause some injury and damage the ship, so potentially they could have been killed by the tinies, but beyond that the arsenal of all these powerful weapons the girls don't understand how to wield is another danger. Why didn't the mother consider that when setting up this mission?

I'm sorry it most of this feedback seems negative, but again it's not really my cup of tea. I just wanted to share my own thoughts which are honest even if they are negative, since no one else was giving you any feedback at all, and I'm sorry for that.

I really love this new story—it’s absolutely amazing! I’m into this strong sense of contrast, and it’s so humiliating. I also love reading about Christine’s mom’s story. Can’t wait for your updates!

Really well written! Please continue!