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Reviewer: memesRlife Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 02 2025 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

This story is a masterpiece.


I love the approach you’ve taken to it.While I enjoy rampage stories having a completely unreflective guiltless remorseless one-note giantess doesn’t suit a proper story. It works quite well in erotica(which I have enjoyed some from your other stories) but not for a proper story.


“I loomed” is so good because it’s a bit different. Firstly the concept of Giantess coming ack at a smaller size to view the results of her carnage and destruction is such an interesting concept and i’ve always been an fan of giantesses having a human size and a giant size, I feel like it’s and underrated trope in size fics.


Beth is such an interesting giantess. She actually allows herself to feel guilt for the suffering her actions cause the hapless tinies in her wake, which is unheard of in rampage stories. If there’s one line the story that encapsulates her mentality it’s this.”my desires are for dominance not annihilation.”


I love giantesses like her to dominate or rampage not necessarily to be cruel or hurt their victims but more so to make themselves feel good and if anyone is hurt in their self service then so be it but cruelness is not the express intention and it’s ultimately secondary to their own pleasure. In other words it’s not personal or vindictive.


Another thing I love is fearplay, and there’s plenty in this story. The first person who tries to interact with her Beth starts using her as a source to feed her sadism with fear. Sandy is a great addition to the story she’s an excellent presence for Beth to feed her manifesto and modus operandi to, while she’s fucking terrified of her and the sheer power she holds.


I love how she tries to wrestle with her and sorrow to  be pragmatic in asking Beth if she’s here to finish the job, knowing if she was there was nothing that could protect her and the rest of the citizens that are unaware there was  a walking calamity in their midst.


Thankfully Beth since Beth aim isn’t total annihilation she’s quite benevolent for a rampage prone Giantess. Not only does she humour Sandy’s continued existence she allows her tag along and ask any question she wants about her.

I like that she spares children and pets that’s a cute quirk of her mercy.


Another silver bullet question Sandy asks is if she feels guilt and remorse, And this where the dichotomy of Beth’s philosophy comes into play she allows herself to be human enough to feel guilt for the horrible things she’s done to people. 


However she’s ultimately in the business of her own self pleasure from feeding her sadism on the terror she inflicts on the  populace so she won’t allow remorse because she can’t feel so bad for making herself feel so good. Which is why she’s delayed in her restoration effort she enjoys the fear and dominance.


Another thing I love is her assertiveness in dehumanizing all other people as her toys and playthings. 


They’re hers.


She owns them all and can do with them as she pleases.


All this combined with the awful scene make Sandy snap and she attacks Beth. Due to her empathy and understanding she allows Beth to get this out of her system,


Even though she’s impervious another giantess may have taken this slight as reason to doom the entire city as punishment but she let’s it happen and even feel the need to alleviate the sorrow that Sandy’s feelings.


They then go on to unlock Sandra’s own macrophillia fetish, I concur with Beth, I can’t wait fora ginormous Sandy comes to Beth little place of residence and punish the nenfarious itch by meticulously obliterating her city while Beth gets off on it.


To sum it up.


I greatly awake a sequel and more stories in the vain of this and “Beth loomed” I really want to see her interaction with her co-workers,


I love the idea of someone so powerful being to assume a form so mundane and the effect that it has on the other mites, knowing that a regular human like them posses the power end them and everything they’ve ever known as easily as one draws breath if she wanted to.


And I want so see Beth get her wish as a switch.







Author's Response:

Thank you so much for such a detailed review. It's clear from what you've written that the feeling and ideas I meant to express really came through. I almost always try to tell an actual story in addition to whatever kinks I'm exploring.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2025 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very good! 

Beth maybe teleporting a copy of a city into her room with a terrarium could be interesting, have Sandra or someone as a pet too, or use people for proper food toppings. Or as an extension material altering power, maybe give high heels/sedge heels perfect balance for those kinds of crushing and even ability to still feel thought them like it was barefoot so not to loos that. 

Can’t wait to see what you do next!

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