[Report This]Date: December 07 2025 5:59 AM Title: Reflections from Within
Interesting story for Kyle Candy (chapters 37 thru 65). I really liked the setup for this one. I might have changed a couple things (perhaps the time lapsed after Kyle was trapped in the giant realm - I would have had him travel only for 2 years instead of 10 and I would have aged Carol to her late 30s/early 40s; and at the end, I would have had the voring be unaware from Kyle's perspective, either by Carol or Fiona May). That being said, wonderfully written chapters there. Might be your finest work and I can tell you put a good amount of time and thought into it.
Author's Response:
Thanks. It's my favorite instalment so far as well. The years were chosen based on a woman I liked over 2 different time periods. So I kind of just wrote as I was bound by my own memories. But your way would have worked too.