Date: July 26 2025 12:07 AM Title: Beneath Her Care
Yay for new chapters! I should post an actual review over just a comment, but a reply to your response first.
I prefer stretched dialogue the most and don't want it changed! I'm more picky with giantess content, and that combined with the in depth details of being tiny and time differences is what gets me the most with giantess, and I am glad you're into that as well! I do understand that longer sentences would be inconvenient, a suggestion would be to mix it up with that. Shorter dialogue will be stretched, and longer would be simply bolded. For my stories in my documents, I would also add in an asterisk after the bold and end of the dialogue, the more asterisks after a sentence, the tinier/slower the guy would be hearing and feeling it. Please more of the stretched dialogue whenever possible!
Thank you for making Tiny Drift and Company Property! I am into F/m and FF/m almost exclusively, so this story appeals to me most. Yeah it is worth the effort for these specific stories, I only made them private instead of posting them publicly. I would do so soon, feeling more confident with them, thanks again! Also I know this is a personal project, but cool I know you first from the Shize artworks!
To the review! I am glad that Madison and her two girls Stella and Alissa are both gentle and sweet to Tiny, yet also very alluring and dominating over him! The family are all very beautiful and being so tiny to experience their love, size difference, and face and body details are all so amazing! Tiny is more than just company property, he's their little guy and the women are his entire worlds! I like the kissing and closeness, sweet intimate relationship to Tiny that he definitely needs for his size and I am a sucker for sweet romance. The horny parts are arousing and fitting. Powerful, sexy, and lustful, but also casual and simple, as I prefer most! Tiny is very lucky to be experiencing all that. I know you put a disclaimer of having AI assist you, but I still find your creative input with the story and glad that it could help you create them! A 10/10 story for sure!
Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate the feedback! For this story, I might keep it the same in terms of the dialogue, maybe I'll stretch it a bit more, or I'll just leave it the same and have the stretching implied throughout the details that it's stretched further. I might end up using that suggestion for future projects, but we'll see (I really do like the stretched dialogue personally so I'll need to see what I end up settling on lol).
I'm glad you like them and that they helped you in some way! Also appreciate the support on the Shize front c;
Hopefully there's more hornyness and nice interactions to come!
[Report This]Date: July 25 2025 10:31 PM Title: Beneath Her Care
Great story, but as someone that English isn't my first language the stretched way you're writing the giantess is pretty hard to read. Other than that everything great !
Author's Response:
Thank you, I appreciate the feedback! I thought it might be an issue, but I couldn't think of a better way to get it across how slow everything is from the tiny's perspective, thought the best way would be to drag out the dialogue as well... which I can definitely see it being harder to read. I think it might be too late to adjust on this story, but maybe in a future story I'll take that into account and keep it to capitalization and bolding the text.
[Report This]Date: July 24 2025 7:42 AM Title: Beneath Her Care
Finally a story that takes into account size difference time scales and details! I used to post stories with drawn out words for giantess dialogue as well, but most people found it annoying and I deleted those stories and stopped posting for years. Been so long since I've got hooked onto a giantess story and you motivate me to try and post again on this site. Also I noticed you're Shize, that's a nice surprise!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I originally thought that people might not like the stretched dialogue either, and also that it might be too stretched currently since it might not make sense to stretch full dialogue sentences further at smaller sizes later on...
Glad these small horny stories motivated you to post again, definitely think it's worth the effort to make stuff that's harder to find and that you're into!
Haha I forgot I had it that on my profile, this is completely separate and unrelated to Shize, just a personal project ;)
[Report This]Date: July 24 2025 3:25 AM Title: Beneath Her Care
Wow, I loved it! I loved the way you described the giant, booming voices in bold. The poor tyni must live in terror surrounded by these gigantic women.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! That's his life now, and it'll only get more extreme as he continues to shrink smaller c;