[Report This]Date: March 18 2014 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introductions
So hot you forget it is technically incest.
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In the story we find out that Zach has no blood relation to his "cousin".
[Report This]Date: January 01 2012 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introductions
Super hot... A sequel would nice.
[Report This]Date: June 01 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introductions
Once again, I forget to rate.
Date: June 01 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introductions
I have been on this site for about six months now, and I can't believe I haven't read this before! The story is excellent, filled with lots of tantalizing scenes, which I love.
Date: June 18 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introductions
This is my first review, and I'm using it more as just a comment box.
You mentioned in your Bio that you hoped for feedback, Newmark, so I'm going to try to give you some If you want more depth, feel free to contact me back.
I liked this story a LOT. I'm a big fan of the original, and Chelgi's work in general. Your story has a very different take and feel, but I think that's great. It was a really good example of a kind/gentle story that is still strongly erotic. I loved the feel you created of her still being dominant in the situations, but wanting to use that power to please. That's all I can think of for now, I hope you keep writing :-)