[Report This]Date: June 24 2025 10:19 AM Title: Adult Initiation Examination
Oh man, I was wondering how something would happen to Ian when there was no way of failing the test, I didn't think it would happen because of Amy.
So what I'm wondering about now is, how will people react and will they honestly believe he messed it up that bad? There's no way they wouldn't look into this since it has to look really suspicious, I'm guessing.
Either way, really invested in this one, it looks really promising so far. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
Well, it is a dystopian society so things like appealing results may not be that easy regardless of the circumstances. But, it is indeed suspicious so perhaps the truth may come out after all. I'll try not to reveal too much details for now.
Hope you keep enjoying the story!
Date: June 24 2025 9:46 AM Title: Prologue
Love the story so far. Cant wait to see when the characters get the results from their tests. Cant wait to see how Cherie reacts to her tiny brother after looking up to him all these years.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review!
I'm a huge fan of your stories as well so this means a lot to me! I've read them many times since many years ago!
I'm so glad you like the story so far and I really hope I don't disappoint once it gets to the size parts!
Date: June 24 2025 7:52 AM Title: Prologue
Heyy bro, can I ask a favour.
I am turning '18' on 27 June this year. Please if you can, try to add someone of my personality in this story!!!
Bcoz I want to be a small part of your story, as I personally found it the most well-written and thoughtful story till now!
Although I will understand if you can't. (my personality details are as follow)
I was quite good in studies, but now I am not that good (although I am still high above average). I am somewhat trying-to-pretend cool but not actually and many times mess up cause of that.
I have athletic body and have played district and state-level basketball, becoming tournament champion and runner up in the 2 consecutive years.
I am although a bit good looking (according to my gf) but I have a short temper and not so good height (172cm).
Yup pretty much all that. Although I know I am pretty much clingy now, but what can I do? I have never found such a befitting and well-written story of my type till now.
Author's Response:
Hello, thank you for writing this request.
First of all, happy birthday in advance. Unfortunately it will be very unlikely for me to fit additional characters since I have already drafted more than half of the story.
The good news it that your personality write-up does give me some ideas, so I could possibly post a spinoff set in the SRP universe around your character in the future(might not be a long one and no promises as to when I will get around to making it).
If this is okay with you, you can email me at gtswrath@gmail.com with any additional details you wish to add.(e.g. do you want your girlfriend to be in the story as well?)
Date: June 24 2025 7:32 AM Title: Adult Initiation Examination
The desks around her grew more restless; the faint tapping of pens, the furtive dart of eyes, the scratching of skin where nerves erupted in hives.
Wow, this line is some piece of art! It just simply impresses me to an entirely new level.
Also, why they did use pencils in the examinations like these. Mostly ball point pens are used, and for some important exams, Digital devices or computers are taken in use.
Anyway, this made room for easy cheating and the story to take this interesting turn.
Hoping for new chapter again (I am too impatient I guess)
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
I did have to think hard about how to make the name swap possible even in a written test, due to the points you mentioned.
The best idea I could go for was having the character shade their names in those circles that some exams use, since the shading is usually done with pencil. (It's the kind of test, usually multiple choice test, where the paper has circles each corresponding to a number or letter, then you shade in your answers/your name. A machine then reads it through some optical recognition thing)
New chapter will come soon, hopefully.
[Report This]Date: June 23 2025 6:02 PM Title: Prologue
Very cool concept, original story 10/10
Author's Response:
Thank you for your support!
The story will get rather hardcore later on, but I hope you will still enjoy it.
Date: June 22 2025 8:46 AM Title: The Night Before
Oh now, This chapter is telling me that although exam is based on Academics, but still any sort of question or problem can appear.
It can even Be only 2-3 questions with 100 of marks or thousands of questions, easy or difficult, related to studies or not.
This whole idea makes this exam frightful.
Although Ian has almost no chance to loose, There might be something else waiting for him. On the other hand, Amy might end up bigger than her bully.
Anything can happen from next chapters. However, I am also interested in the plot and story.
I hope all these chapters release as soon as possible. Oh Lord, I can't wait anymore.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the support!
I'll do my best to release the chapters quickly but I am working on other series at the same time as well. I'll keep to a regular schedule as much as possible.
Date: June 22 2025 8:01 AM Title: Prologue
Wow, I just read This story With patience, and IT IS AWESOME. The way you explain everything while progressing the story, introducing the characters, Things like SRP and AIP which seems too real.
Almost you have almost nullified the gap between reality and this world.
Waiting For new chapters. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind comment.
I hope you will continue to enjoy the progression of the story!
[Report This]Date: June 21 2025 4:31 AM Title: Prologue
Good start, I like the concept. Interested to see where this goes
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
I put a lot of thought into planning this story, so I hope you will end up enjoying it.
Date: June 20 2025 1:42 PM Title: Prologue
Please tell in advance the approx size of characters. Also, what have you thought abt Cheiri?
Author's Response:
Thank you for the comment.
As for what will happen to each character in terms of the SRP, I'd like to keep it a mystery for now. But we will be getting to that part really soon, so not to worry.
Date: June 19 2025 11:00 PM Title: Prologue
Interesting start. I like the idea of a test that decides one's fate.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
This was an idea I wanted to work on for a while, and I finally found the inspiration to detail a proper plot around it. Expect a pretty long series.