Reviews For Given a Chance
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: littlestuser91 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 19 2025 6:11 PM Title: Given a Chance

You have good ideas for stories, and your writing isn't bad at all. But I HIGHLY recommend utilizing spacing. Everything being in a single paragraph, or in this case, two, makes it very hard to continue reading. Generally, breaking them up into plenty of smaller paragraphs will make it easier for the reader to read and make the story an overall more pleasurable experience. Anyway, keep writing, you're doing well with your ideas. 

You must login (register) to review.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.