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Reviewer: bigbobfeller Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2025 11:38 PM Title: Tower of Worship

Wow, the second chapter was even better than the first! I'm excited to see how this goes!



Author's Response:

Thank you!
Inferno is part of my actual studies and I wanted to find a good balance in bringing it to the size story medium.
I think I'm happy with this take and continuation, I'd love to do some sort of longer version of the story later, maybe an adventure with these characters or a more developed party through the circles.

I wanted to test the waters and feedback/ideas for direction has been really nice, I want to do this short story justice and give it a good closing first before tackling something longer.
Thanks again!

Reviewer: xanders_H Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 15 2025 2:51 PM Title: Tower of Worship

The storys premise is pretty interesting and the silent ghastly environment was a rather cool touch when combined with your style of writing. I don't usually follow story's but this one intrigues me. It be great to see it continued!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much I really appreciate that!
I was actually thinking of this as a segment from a longer journey with these characters and was kind of testing the waters to see how it felt on its own. Still deciding whether to keep going from here or take a step back and build something more in-depth from the beginning, but either way, I’d love to keep this moment as part of the arc and maybe do some adjustments to style or focus based on feedback. Super glad it landed with you!

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