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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2006 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 2

Sounds like an interesting situation. But no good action yet - only potential.
The Chapters are too short to be considered as real chapters.

Reviewer: nostromo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2006 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

looks like it could be a nice one, pete, please continue!!

Reviewer: Tenshi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2006 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow ... I'll wait for the next chapters to make my opinion

Reviewer: Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 15 2006 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story has promise. I hope that you will continue it.

Author's Response: I will Stanley. Glad you like it.

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