Reviews For Mom's Day Out
Reviewer: DanceDance1982 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2025 10:12 PM Title: What choice does Jon have?
Date: June 03 2025 10:12 PM Title: What choice does Jon have?
wow, I’m hooked. I really love the pacing and how naturally the dialogue flows. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: DanceDance1982 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2025 10:09 PM Title: What choice does Jon have?
Date: June 03 2025 10:09 PM Title: What choice does Jon have?
wow, I’m hooked. I really love the pacing and how naturally the dialogue flows. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
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Date: June 03 2025 2:30 PM Title: Mom's got big plans!





Date: June 03 2025 2:30 PM Title: Mom's got big plans!
Mom’s Vacation was a classic from back in the day! Loved that story!
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Date: June 01 2025 9:51 AM Title: What choice does Jon have?
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Date: June 01 2025 9:51 AM Title: What choice does Jon have?
Liking this so far, great first chapter - reminds me of some of my favourites from over the years!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I've definitely had a lot of inspiration from other stories! Hope you continue to enjoy it!
Reviewer: V11 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2025 5:48 AM Title: What choice does Jon have?
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Date: June 01 2025 5:48 AM Title: What choice does Jon have?
Excellent start! I hope you continue!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Don't you worry -- I have a lot in my head floating around already to write!