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Reviewer: Avenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2026 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 31 2025 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 7

So I just read all the chapters. First let me say that the story is easy to read and get a good feeling of what is happening. Even though the story is being told more as a narration. 

So with that being said I will be looking forward to the next chapter. The story is got my attention.



Author's Response:

I actually had trouble uploading chapter 3 on it's own, so I just added it to chapter 2, to add further context.

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