



Date: May 28 2025 3:19 AM Title: Part 1
I enjoyed the overall writing and might have preferred this as an original one off than a side story of “how to train your brother”. It seems so far off from the personality of how you’ve developed Reese and Olivia that reading this felt like trying to force a puzzle piece into the wrong slot.
I won’t lie that I’ve always might have wanted something like this to happen while reading the earlier chapters of HTTYB, so I can see the appeal to some.
None the less I did have fun reading this! Always appreciate your stories!!!
Author's Response:
fully understand and considering i just got commissioned to write two more chapters that are even more far fetched and out of characters, it wont get "better" in that way lol. but people are sitll enjoying it
Date: May 26 2025 6:29 AM Title: Part 1
I definitely like the direction this was heading but have to say couldn't find the next part on DA so I gave up looking. Was it under subs or .. is it on the DISCORD LINKED TO DA SUB not on the DA?
Author's Response:
I actually haven't even posted this first part over there yet because their rules against incest are so tight that I have to go through the story and censor it first, which is always a pain, so this site usually gets stuff first. It's available for subscribers though yes (maybe I should've made that more clear, I thought it was implied) but just like with everything else I write the second half will be available for free down the road.