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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 04 2010 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Not bad! Although, I think you meant to say "carve" up. Unless, of course, your spell-checker has gone "rouge."

;-)

Author's Response: My bad. I did mean carve up. I have fixed the error.

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