Date: May 23 2025 8:30 PM Title: Prologue
Hello, you have interesting stories. Good use of AI to create images as well as some descriptions.
Aya is pretty interesting. Wonder if she has some isekai perks(which can be why she's so good at handling her body). I'm certain that not many people in Tokyo have this talent. Also, she should know Reymi hears her. Even when she's in the toilet. She's literally ON HER. Interesting what she has to say about Reimi or the goddess that she lived on before.
Also, advice for handling sizes. You can just mark them as 1.67m * 10^8 aka(+8) somewhere in the notes( it wouldn't break impression of big numbers for a reader then. Yeah, I know 167 000 km is much more impressive than 1.67m(+8)).
But it's easier to understand how big someone is for someone.
Like Layla is 0.72(+7) at her normal size (btw where is she?) which is around 22 times smaller than average 'new goddess' and light goddess is 1.02(+5) which is roughly 70 times smaller than that.
From how Goddess school is located on Reimi's boob, I assume she's as big to goddesses as goddesses to humans? Aka 1.57(+16)?
[Report This]Date: May 21 2025 9:59 PM Title: Two-Faced
Damn, what a twist. I definitely thought the chapter title was going to refer to one of the OTHER girls but wow, there is definitely more to Aya-chan than meets the eye. Really, I thought she was going to be some joke character in Chapter 3. Looking forward to finding out more about Aya and the others!
Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2025 6:55 AM Title: Face-to-Face with Infinity
Great chapter! You got across Ryemi's immense cosmic size well. And based on the last chapter of After Stories, even this size probably isn't her max. Looking forward to Sarah's journey.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind review!
Grand Goddess size was a real challenge for me to tackle when making this series, so I'm glad that you liked it! We will be interacting with that kind of size here and there throughout the series, but for the most part, we will be focusing on the girls and their journey. Regardless, I hope I can bring out the scale and charms of the characters no matter what size they're at.
[Report This]Date: May 15 2025 11:03 PM Title: Prologue
Hello!
I was browsing for new stories to read on the site and found this neat little piece. Oh boy! After finishing the latest chapter, I immediately went back to read The Origin 1 and 2 and the side stories.
This is an amazing universe you have built! This is one of the serieses on the site that really tells stories in such a grand scale (pun intended hehe), I am afraid only a few series rival it. Just amazing characters that makes me want to invest in! Looking forward to this new story unfolding!
p.s. I saw The Origin showing up in Most Recent a lot of times actually but I wasn't interested until I found out there's these anime images that help visualize these stories and oh, they really enhance the experience!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
I'm glad you enjoy my stories! I'm still new to writing stories but I put a lot of work into them, so it is reassuring to see that people like them.
[Report This]Date: May 08 2025 11:08 AM Title: The Navel
Hmmmmmm interesting can’t wait to see how the classes go
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Classes will be starting soon so don't worry!
[Report This]Date: May 07 2025 11:46 AM Title: Prologue
Great to see you back, the GOAT returns. I will leave a review on after stories as well. Anyway looks like an interesting start. Its funny how Ryemi went from wanting to find a planet for everyone and shrink down to not only still being a living planet millions of years later but also getting other goddesses involved as well. We did see Ren forming Ryemis religion in the after story chapter and now shes known as the Grand Goddess so I'm assuming the religion really took of lmao.
I am definitely curious about the events that happened in between, like did Ryemi eventually manage to shrink down, and then realize she actually liked being a living planet or has she just been like this the entire time. Also I did a double take when I saw the name Amara. Since she lost her power, I'm assuming Ryemi just grew her to 100 000 km tall and Ryemi is probably the one growing the other goddesses as well. Amara did have humans living on her before, but those were for her breast milk experiments where humans were transformed but shes mellowed out since then.
Still being a living planet means they can't really move around much, they just have to stay floating in space. Though I guess Amara gets her scientific fulfillment from watching a planet develop on her body rather than researching. I'm still surprised so many goddesses went for this, considering the last chapter of Origin 2 was basically Ryemi saying how much of a burden being a living planet was lol.
I am curious to see what Ryemi is like in this story, now that she is millions of years old. I wonder if Ren and Ryan are still around, Ryemi could probably have stopped their aging. Also Mimi is millions of years old so she likely has her domain at full potential so she might have the power of creation and so could do things even Ryemi can't. Since Ryemi is limited by what she can exactly imagine but Genesis was able to create goddesses with abilities that even Genesis didn't have so Mimi might be able to do the same maybe.
I have really enjoyed your stories, In my opinion, I think you are a fantastic writer. I have gotten really invested in the world and the characters. I've never felt that the chapters were too long or dragged, if anything even with long chapters I just want to read even more, though those cliff hangers you sometimes use probably contributed to that feeling lol.
Since you mentioned other stories, does that include a story set in the dark Mimi timeline? Im a big fan of that ending. Also since you don't have the name in brackets in the chapter titles, does that mean this whole story is going to be Sarahs point of view
Anyway this looks like a great start, im curious to see what exactly goddess school entails and how Ryemi even got this idea in the first place and to learn more about Sarah. Is she a nice girl like Ryemi or a secret freak like Mimi lmao.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your support as always!
I can see you have a lot of questions about the previous series, and a lot of them were intended to be answered in After Stories since I technically created this story after already writing most of After Stories. As a result, there are a lot of gaps between what happened at the end of The Origin and the starting of Goddess School. Nonetheless, this story can mostly still be enjoyed standalone, with the worldbuilding and setting a lot less convoluted than in The Origin.
I may decide to release more of After Stories eventually if people really want to read it, but personally it felt way too lengthy and draggy as I wrote(especially towards the end). Maybe I'll release up till chapter 8 of After Stories to give a slightly better context about how the world ended up this way in Goddess School.
[Report This]Date: May 07 2025 4:06 AM Title: Prologue
Wow !!!!! Now this is great start
Author's Response:
Thank you for your support and for reading all my work! Hope you will keep enjoying this new story and direction.