Very good, erotic story, but it's written as if in poem format as the punctuation is awful, making it difficult to read until one gets used to the format, and even then, it isn't easy.

It does have vore, with the toilet only referenced. The boss is a good villainess as she receives her offering of a young man for her lunch break. He is unaware that this is going to happen and that he is going to be shrunk down and eaten. One gets the sense that this is not an uncommon occurrence for Laura.

Rating is based on the story, not the style or punctuation.