Giantess World
Reviews For Nurse Merith
Reviewer: phillips Signed 
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Date: May 12 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
[Report This]Date: May 12 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great story!
Please continue
Reviewer: Canaan Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 5 (Joe realizes that he is in a spot)
Date: March 29 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 5 (Joe realizes that he is in a spot)
That random group-trample at the end of chapter 6 was very well done! Bravo!
Reviewer: WilliamScarlet Signed 
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Date: March 26 2010 11:50 PM Title: The encounter
[Report This]Date: March 26 2010 11:50 PM Title: The encounter
This has been really fun to read, I look forward to seeing more. I hope you take the criticisms above as constructive as your story is a great one! Thank you!
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2010 7:18 PM Title: The encounter
[Report This]Date: March 23 2010 7:18 PM Title: The encounter
Good story line.
Would be improved with better spelling and grammar.
A boy finds himself in a hospital with very unusual protocols.
Reviewer: lucidiasat Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2010 9:45 PM Title: The encounter
[Report This]Date: March 01 2010 9:45 PM Title: The encounter
Great start, I love stories with nurses. It's a little on the short side (note - not a criticism but merely an observation twinged with hope for longer future additions), but it's well written and clear. Keep it up!