Date: April 18 2025 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Morning View
Alright, I saw this on the "Most Recent" page and don't know how I missed the first installment. If I find the time, I'll go back and give it the proper review it deserves, but suffice to say...
I. LOVE. THIS!!!
As for the whole story, I love the world setting, the way tinies are viewed/treated, Aaron's journey, and his entire dynamic with the Beckers. I love how possessive Dean is of Aaron as well.
As for this first chapter of the sequel in particular...
There is simply nothing like that special brand of humiliation that comes from M/m interactions in which both men are straight, but the big man teases the little man about liking it and the little man has to pretend that he does. In particular, I love the idea of Bill's "love taps" against the wall of his case that Aaron has to lean into. I really enjoy the mocking way that Bill tells Aaron to "be a man" by accepting being dry humped as a tiny toy!
I love that you incorporate foot stuff into it as well as the obvious crotch stuff, as I enjoy both when it comes to M/m dynamics. I certainly hope we get to see more from both Bill and Dean!
There's a certain activity that has been teased at with both Dean and now Bill that I'd love to see ;P
I think this installment will be a great opportunity to explore these character dynamics further! I can't wait to see what Aaron's day with Kelly looks like (I hope there's foot stuff after her run lol), and of course I'm sure little Aaron's full day with Bill will be quite something. Even though we already got great stuff with Dean and Brooke in the last installment, I'd leave to see more kinds of interactions explored! For example, I'd like to see how Dean is with him on a day when he maybe doesn't have classes, or maybe we could see the ache of Aaron's longing for women and his former love life when being teased by Brooke as she teases him about the crush she had on him.
I'm curious to see how Aaron's service to Dean differs from his service to the other Beckers, beyond what we've already seen. Dean is officially Aaron's owner, and I'd love to see you go deeper into that! Maybe in being conditioned, Aaron starts to begrudgingly develop some affection towards Dean as his owner, almost like a pet feels. This could be a great source of distress in Aaron's identity as he struggles to retain his humanity.
In any case, this review is long enough haha
Keep up the great work!
I can't wait to see more!
[Report This]Date: April 16 2025 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Morning View
OMG !!! Let’s goo I’m so happy to see this story again can’t wait to see what happens
Author's Response:
Hey thanks a lot, I'm glad to hear that. I'm excited to continue it myself and there's still plenty to come. Thanks again for the comment!
Date: April 16 2025 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Morning View
Possibly less than half an inch or so.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks again for your comment. I took a look at a ruler for reference and realized I was definitely picturing Aaron closer to 2 inches. I've adjusted this story and previous story to reflect that, so sincerely thanks for the feedback it helped hone the story. There will definitely be 1 inchers, using tinies a jewelry and accessories is something I want to explore and layer into this world. As for true micro stuff I don't think there will be much in this series. I do really love Micro-Titan interactions though and am definitely going to be focusing more on that on the next series I do. It's just a vague sketch so far but I'm probably going to use the Brob-Gulliver-Lilliputian size scale in that new series, so look forward to that when I finally start that up. Thanks again for the comments. Please keep rating and reviewing!
Date: April 16 2025 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Morning View
Would you consider making him smaller?
Author's Response:
I was torn between 2 and 3 inches but that's the general size I was going for. There will be other tinies as small as one inch though but I'm not sure there will be any appearing in part 2 of this story. If there were tinies of a smaller size what would you like to see with them? Thanks for the comment and please keep reading!